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Pain by ~vegetaslilryoko:iconvegetaslilryoko:


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Submitted: May 14
File Size: 817 KB
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Resolution: 600×792
Comments: 10
Favourites & Collections: 2 [who?]

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I didn't make her short on purpose..I just shortened the pic on the scanner because of useless text. Another design with back and side views for ~ShadowOfAeons .

Details on Pain a little later in a journal. Or maybe in story form.. I dunno...

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~XCrazy-ShunshineX:iconXCrazy-ShunshineX: May 14, 2008, 3:06:26 PM
This character creeps me out, but keep in mind creepy is a good thing. More constructive criticism.

The first picture, the one from behind, looks overall good, though her left arm looks kind of strange.

The profile picture also looks overall good, but there's only two things I find. Her neck is just slightly to thick for a girl's and it looks like she's hunching over, though...that might be what you were going for...Also, a little compliment, I love the nose you drew. I can't draw profile noses that great anymore.

The last picture, the frontal view, looks great.

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Gohan: Dad, could you kick an angel's ass?
Goku: Damn right I could!


EPIC BATTLE SUPER AWESOME ACTION GO!!
*juunana:iconjuunana: May 14, 2008, 11:30:31 PM
Love her outfit and hair!<3 Id like to see in colour <3

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There is no meaning in our world
And no meaning in us who live there
We, meaningless, think of the world
Although knowing that there is no meaning there
Is even meaningless itself
~hybrid-Sarki:iconhybrid-Sarki: May 15, 2008, 1:36:00 AM
Y'know...I want her boots. They're kickass :D And character sketching is always good, since the more you draw someone, the better you get. Nice job~!

(And...if you don't mind me saying, just a note for the middle one: Her chest should be a little lower. Stand sideways in the mirror, and you should be able to see that a female chest slopes down a little bit before coming out. Having it high makes her head and neck look really big)

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"Alright Turniphead; My dad taught me not to be scared of bullies like you. "
...You gotta love DBZ.
~vegetaslilryoko:iconvegetaslilryoko: May 16, 2008, 5:42:43 PM
You will sometime soon.

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Pickles: Hey Nate, they're going to kill the governor on account of what he said about you.
`----Nathan: Man, I love chips.

~saurons-bane Mein lieb!
~vegetaslilryoko:iconvegetaslilryoko: May 16, 2008, 5:43:41 PM
Thanks for the compliment and the constructive criticism

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Pickles: Hey Nate, they're going to kill the governor on account of what he said about you.
`----Nathan: Man, I love chips.

~saurons-bane Mein lieb!
~hybrid-Sarki:iconhybrid-Sarki: May 17, 2008, 7:55:33 AM
I'm trying to make an effort to not just type "OMG! HOW AWESOME!" etc anymore :P I hope it's working :D

(and, welcome~!)

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"Alright Turniphead; My dad taught me not to be scared of bullies like you. "
...You gotta love DBZ.
~vegetaslilryoko:iconvegetaslilryoko: May 17, 2008, 6:24:16 PM
It is :nod:

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Pickles: Hey Nate, they're going to kill the governor on account of what he said about you.
`----Nathan: Man, I love chips.

~saurons-bane Mein lieb!
~Aloria:iconAloria: 21 hours 33 minutes ago
Really cool ^^ I like all the little details that went into her outfit

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~vegetaslilryoko:iconvegetaslilryoko: 11 hours 2 minutes ago
Thank you!

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Pickles: Hey Nate, they're going to kill the governor on account of what he said about you.
`----Nathan: Man, I love chips.

~saurons-bane Mein lieb!